Electrobel

the intro is too long, the really part of dub is too short, like a rythmics part, too short aussi... but the melody is good.

The track is not very constructed... What I mean is I was wondering when it would begin, until it came to its end. The melody is fine but you never know where it leads, there is a bit of lack in harmony...

So my opinion is the idea is good, but the whole track is not thought enough.

Keep on the good work !

That right, the intro is really too long, and the dub part too short ( I repeat, I know...) but the dub part is really coooooooooooooooooool!!!
Whatever if you say it's done for, I belive you ;)

Thanks to all for your comments and your critics.

I remind to you that is not a classic track of dub, but juste a "electro-dub" version of one of my piece.

So the way i create it is intentional.

You've got the link to the original piece in the description of the song right up !

Thanks again. ;)

hey TCK i finally get the chance to comment your track....
Like Degi i thinks that the intro is too long (almost half of the song !)...actually the general impression is more like the track is not well balance...is not clear where you're going....
You should definitely pump up the bass....it would give more body to your tune and should reduce the mid-high frequency on the 2nd part.
i hope you won't take it the wrong way, and thinking i'm being too critical (there s really good things in your tunes) is just that i feel that your track is unfinish , it needs more work.

yeah very good track , but too short, I want more :) , I like the ambiance, between tranquillity and naivety....

hey TCK, many things to say
(je l'écris en francais, si quelqu'un peut traduire après)
1) tes sons ont un coté très kitch (j'imagine que c'est ton choix) et perso j'ai du mal à le dépasser.

2)le morceau me semble assez déséquilibré au niveau de sa durée : l'intro n'est pas longue, ni ennuyante, elle est même très bien mais la seconde partie est vraiment trop courte c'est un peu comme attendre longtemps le train, pour que celui-ci ne s'arrête pas à la gare! N'hésite pas à faire durer tes morceaux longtemps, puis après tu en enlèves, vaut mieu en avoir trop au début et en enlever, que le contraire!

3) encore au niveau du sons, je trouve que hormis le coté kitch tu devrais plus personnalisé tes sons de guitare, donner plus de chaleur au morceau, lui enlevé ce coté numérique qui fait comme une barrière.

voilà. mais de toute facon de belles idées. j'espère que mon avis pourra t'aider.

too short indeed, also I would remaster it, some sounds are too loud...

If u want check my dub tracks on www.electrobel.be

my username is distreality

check the ones with Gin Moore on the vocals...

yup, it's too short...
for dub, u can take your time...

also I would do a little remastering..
some sounds are a bit too loud...

the idea is good, and the sounds are good as well.

If u want u can allways check my stuff on
[URL]www.electrobel.be[/URL]

my user name is Distreality
The best dub tracks I made are the ones with Gin Moore on the vocals, you'll find them...
let me know what u think of it...

nice, but the intro is too long...
I love your sounds...